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Honestly,
I don't know how to tell you this...
But you constantly enter my thoughts
A smile crosses my lips
When I see your name light up my phone
Butterflies invade my stomach
Whenever I see you smile

A smile so powerful
That I can't help but smile back

Actually,
I reach for you in my sleep
Desperately wishing to find you
Hold onto you
Be safe and comfortable
In a way only you can make me feel

Not being able to adequately
Explain my feelings for you
Tells me that this sort of thing
Doesn't happen every day

Frankly, love, you captivate me
Something I wrote a while ago for my boyfriend. He makes me happy :)
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:iconroseroserose14:
ROSEroseROSE14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ah man... yeah, this is perfect.
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was.
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:iconmistywriter:
Mistywriter Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwww
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:iconpetramariehalliwell:
PetraMarieHalliwell Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's so sweet indeed.
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you think so :)
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:icondarknightskies:
darknightskies Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So cute!! This is wonderful!!
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconkikyoremura:
kikyoremura Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist
Adorable ^-^ This poem relates to so many out there :3
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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:iconxx-cappuccino:
xx-Cappuccino Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So pretty~
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconbepopee:
bepopee Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwwwww :):):)
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehe :)
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:iconbepopee:
bepopee Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:):):)
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:iconjetski3:
jetski3 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Professional Photographer
cute i think see i don't really understand why ....?
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
why... what?
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:iconjetski3:
jetski3 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Professional Photographer
sorry i read that and idk if its sweet or strange im leaning towards strange.
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:iconmylifeasamanda:
MyLifeAsAmanda Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Wow this is really wonderful! It made me think of the person I love and it cheered me up from my crappy mood. So thank you
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww yay! I'm glad it could cheer you up! and thank you!
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:iconmylifeasamanda:
MyLifeAsAmanda Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Please there is absolutely no reason to say thank you!
You're a talented writer by the way.
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you think so :)
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:iconmylifeasamanda:
MyLifeAsAmanda Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
well it's true (from what I have observed from this)
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:iconpoppycostello:
poppycostello Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
<3 it, also <3 the fact that I can empathise, yay for happiness!
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Woot! Thank you :)
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:iconmusiclovingmisfit:
musiclovingmisfit Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
this is so sweet and adorable :)
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you think so :)
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:iconmusiclovingmisfit:
musiclovingmisfit Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
its all because of good writing :D
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:iconangelyunarukami:
AngelYuNarukami Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Simply beautiful! I haven't had the joy of finding love but when I do, I hope this is something similar to what I feel towards that person when it happens!
For now, it just makes me smile! Nice job! ^_^
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Best wishes in finding it :)
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:iconangelyunarukami:
AngelYuNarukami Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
You're welcome! Haha, thank you.
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:iconinvaderheidi:
invaderheidi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of my boyfriend and me. :3
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:iconmidnightbluedestiny9:
me and ________ totally, EEEPPPIICCCC
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha :)
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:icontrumpet1113:
trumpet1113 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
That's so cute! I can't say I've felt the same way, but it's adorable :)
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:icondragononigiri:
DragonOnigiri Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
feell the exact same way about my bf
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy for you :)
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:icondragononigiri:
DragonOnigiri Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
you too :)
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:iconmoreuse:
Moreuse Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:music: it might be love :music:
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:iconmoreuse:
Moreuse Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is a very cute poem.
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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:iconmoreuse:
Moreuse Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome.
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:iconxpanicattheps3x:
xpanicattheps3x Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it. <3
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad :) Thanks
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:iconmarcohalfbodt:
MarcoHalfBodt Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student Artist
Lovely..
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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:icondessertsarestressed:
DessertsAreStressed Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student Writer
Aww, this is is so sweet!! I love it!
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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