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You need to punctuate more, the first stanza should end in a period. This way the meaning is confused by the run-on sentence. This happens a lot throughout the poem. Stanza three appears to be a list, but it doesn't have any commas so I can't tell if it's four separate things the speaker wants, or combined actions.
It's interesting to keep all the stanzas four lines long, as many don't bother with this in free verse. And each stanza having it's own theme lends to the feeling of growth or decision making that characterises the poem.
On behalf of #GrammarNaziCritiques
And seriously, good luck with that situation you mentioned.