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I wish it would rain
That it would wash you away
Out of my skin

I wish the clouds would part
Shine light on realization
What I could be

I wish there was a rainbow
An arc of brilliant colors
A sign to give me hope
I'm sinking fast...
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:icongwenneareble:
GwenneAreble Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
We all need hope :) Why do you say you are sinking?
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm in love with someone that doesn't know what he wants. So he decided to end it between us to try to figure it out.
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:icongwenneareble:
GwenneAreble Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I'm so sorry hun.
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:icondgveil:
DGVeil Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist
It's pretty one. Sad, but pretty.
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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:icondgveil:
DGVeil Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist
You're welcome!
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this one. It is short and to the point but does not loose in emotion.
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:iconsevereweather:
SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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himesama13 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Ooh! Nice to think of that! T-T
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SevereWeather Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks
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